martes, 21 de julio de 2009

vane's vacation

hello
in my vacation went to he pool with all my friends NO FAMILY! , and i went to the movies with my best friend , at night usually listen to music and talk with a friend or just chat online .im not study on vacation , i ate a lot of fast food ! and sometimes go out with my mother and that's all . :)

3 comentarios:

  1. Good.
    Your blog could be illustrated a little better.Also,check the grammar and punctuation on your composition.

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  2. I think your blog could be more colorful and this a little short . Also I believe you should check the grammar. kisses bye

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  3. hi girl, you could write extra informations or invent about your vacations jeje

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